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« on: April 02, 2005, 05:16:10 AM »

Unleashed :woot:

Tragedy :cry:

Teaser  B)  
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« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2005, 11:04:45 AM »

Very nice...thank you
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« Reply #2 on: April 02, 2005, 12:13:57 PM »

AWESOME!!!

Thanks, dude!  
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« Reply #3 on: April 02, 2005, 01:02:12 PM »

Hell yea!!!
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« Reply #4 on: April 03, 2005, 11:58:42 AM »

wow. This  one  actually  looks  like  it's gonna  be  REALISTIC  and  dramatic.

I'm  so  hyped  for  this  one.

 
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« Reply #5 on: April 04, 2005, 01:34:19 PM »

Looks great- but some of Natalie's and Hayden's lines are delivered very poorly in
'Tragety'

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« Reply #6 on: April 04, 2005, 05:59:32 PM »

In the context of the scene they are fine, don't worry.
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« Reply #7 on: April 05, 2005, 01:41:00 PM »

How do you know?
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Mrdodobird

« Reply #8 on: April 05, 2005, 01:44:35 PM »

It's just what happens.

I've filmed some movies where I'm like, "DUDE! That line was done AWESOME!!!" and then I make the trailer, and put the line in, but for some reason it just doesn't "work".

It's weird.  
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Darth_Brad

« Reply #9 on: April 05, 2005, 02:36:31 PM »

"How do you know?"

What Mrdodobird said, very frustrating how that happens.  :unsure:  
As for my confidence in this scene, read the screenplay.  Here is an excerpt...

Padme:  Come away with me.  Help me raise our child.  Leave everything else behind while we still can.
Anakin:  Don't you see, we don't have to run anymore.  I have brought peace to the Republic.  I am more powerful than the Chancellor.  I can overthrow him, and together you and I can rule the galaxy.  Make things the way we want them to be.
Padme:  I don't believe what I'm hearing...Obi-Wan was right.  You've changed.
Anakin:  I don't want to hear anymore about Obi-Wan.  The Jedi turned against me.  Don't you turn against me.
Padme:  I don't know you anymore.  Anakin, you're breaking my heart. I'll never stop loving you, but you are going down a path I can't follow.
Anakin:  Because of Obi-Wan?
Padme:  Because of what you've done...what you plan to do.  Stop, stop now.  Come back! I love you.
Anakin:  (seeing Obi-Wan) Liar!
Padme:  No!
Anakin:  You're with him.  You've betrayed me!  You brought him here to kill me!
Padme:  No!  Anakin , I swear...I...

Anakin is trying to be very threating here; feeling Padme out because he is unsure about who's side she is on.  Plus he is very callused by this point.  At the moment that Order 66 is issued and he starts killing, Vader will be very monotone aside from when he sees Obi-Wan for the first time on Mustafar and as he is burning.

As for Padme, she is trying to hold it in right here and that is why she looks a little fake in the TV spot.  By the end of the lines above she will be sobbing, so I don't think the "...breaking my heart" line was meant to be said as if she has lost control of her emotions.  Basically she is trying to confront him while knowing the answer already, from a convo with Obi-Wan...so to me she is watching what she feared playout in front of her.  
But either way, they will both have to deliever in the following lines.

-Brad    
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Mrdodobird

« Reply #10 on: April 05, 2005, 02:50:43 PM »

Nice use of bold text.  Cheesy
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« Reply #11 on: April 05, 2005, 03:04:22 PM »

Your sig has inspired me  Tongue  
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« Reply #12 on: April 06, 2005, 12:07:34 PM »

Ian's sig. gives me a headache.
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Mrdodobird

« Reply #13 on: April 06, 2005, 01:12:44 PM »

It makes me happy and placid.  
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« Reply #14 on: April 07, 2005, 10:59:47 AM »

Ian, you so rock
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