Yes, I heard the skip at 15:04

I was about to comment on it, opened this up to make sure I remembered and saw you'd already spotted it

GAAAH! At 16:38ish you can see the flashing red light on the camera reflected in the car bumper! DOH!
Quite a story, very funny in places...but not in others. The ending made me smile

(which is a good thing) "Oh Heeeell no..."
What I didn't like was that scene in the office. It just felt lengthy and the discussion between the two co-workers just seemed frivilous. Sure, it explained his past with women, or at least the one's opinion of them, but it had very little bearing on the film as a whole.
And, having spoken in real life, you know I don't like that other actor anyway...his acting style makes me itchy.
Just that whole scene in the office was strange and generally...I felt at least...not indicative of your skills. It may have been the actors, we'll never really know, but I didn't like that scene. It was the most "out of place" in the whole story.
Good start, good ending, GREAT music (kudos to your composer), good look, as ever, that Golden Rabbath Glow that you favor

Lot of good shots, good ideas...just that office scene...
Anyway, that's my review

Sort of run-of-the-mill for Freddy, but still fun to watch.
[EDIT: And, as ever, compression hates you...it never does your films justice]