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FCRabbath

« on: January 24, 2006, 02:42:43 PM »




SOOO Filming will end feb 18th
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djr33

« Reply #1 on: January 24, 2006, 06:25:27 PM »

I said I liked it before, but didn't like the negative space at the top.

Take the old one and put the title on that.

Honestly, this looks like cheap PS.

the lighting isn't realistic and I don't like the style of coloring one half of the screen and not the other.

I don't mean to be insulting or anything... just how it looks to me. Sorry if I'm annoying.




But.... I do like the color on her face. Maybe you should leave her face colored. I dunno.

The style is cool, but really doens't work as is.
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Funk, E

« Reply #2 on: January 24, 2006, 06:34:28 PM »

I've gotta say I really like this a lot more than the other one.  A little smart blur might help it just a little, though--it's kind of noisy, and I don't think that that fits.
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« Reply #3 on: January 24, 2006, 08:41:48 PM »

i dont beleive i saw the other one, buuuut... this ones cool! Cheesy Smiley)
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FCRabbath

« Reply #4 on: January 24, 2006, 10:20:26 PM »

a Cheap PS?
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djr33

« Reply #5 on: January 24, 2006, 10:21:04 PM »

Yeah. Its a line right down the center.

if you're going to do it like that, you need to make it look like its natural light and follow the curves of the images.

Yeah.
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Funk, E

« Reply #6 on: January 24, 2006, 10:24:05 PM »

It isn't a line down the center though, it's a gradient.  Look closer.
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FCRabbath

« Reply #7 on: January 24, 2006, 10:37:40 PM »

The lighting is natural. The only thing i messed with is the color.
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djr33

« Reply #8 on: January 24, 2006, 11:38:54 PM »

Yeah. Color.

You need to carefully outline the right half of her coat and make that colored. Keep color away from the half inch beyond that. It looks terrible.

The thing that I really hate is between the text and her collar right in the center. The color ends abruptly. Its ugly.

If you were to make a specific outline around the right side of her coat, then it would actually look really cool.

meh. /opens PS


OK. Here. 30 seconds with the sponge tool on desaturate.
It was ugly. Now its pretty. Its not even that noticable, but it really helps it for me. I may just be nuts, though.
Look carefully at the area described above (and below the text)
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djr33

« Reply #9 on: January 24, 2006, 11:47:09 PM »

^^Just increased the saturation of the sky a bit. I did maybe a bit too much on the plants or whatever, but the sky adds to the effect.

I really like it now.
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Funk, E

« Reply #10 on: January 25, 2006, 08:41:31 AM »

I like the original a lot more, I have to say.  NOW it's just a line, and not a smooth transition.
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« Reply #11 on: January 25, 2006, 08:57:40 AM »

Sorry Dan, I have to disagree, I liked FCRabbath's remake. I thought the gradient added a lot to the poster...and yours just looks odd on the jacket :-\ And what's with the funny color right above her head in the sky?? It's brighter blue...

I like his, lol, you having a bad day? You used a lot of harsh words like "ugly" and "hate"... *feels your forehead*
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djr33

« Reply #12 on: January 25, 2006, 09:58:02 AM »

I was tired last night. Yeah.


BUT... I still don't like the look it cutting off on a random spot. You need reason. It should look like some weird lighting effect, not like a mask.

It doesn't look like a gradient to me.

The weird blue is that I made the sky more saturated. It was a cheap job. Redo what I did if you want to use it.
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Funk, E

« Reply #13 on: January 25, 2006, 11:20:44 AM »

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It doesn't look like a gradient to me.

Well, uh, look closer.  There very clearly is a transitional element--it doesn't cut off from desaturated to saturated all at once.
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FCRabbath

« Reply #14 on: January 25, 2006, 11:27:36 AM »

I changed the background with a bit more light and did the gradiant more smoother better. How about now?
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