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« Reply #30 on: May 31, 2005, 07:58:41 PM » |
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Yeah, but since I'm "running" this thread, I reserve the right to type a lot  ... basically I wanted to get it moving to something more interesting. Also, we may have to revise Nike away from a brand name... whatever.CUT TO: WAREHOUSE: The pair is being interogated and seem ready to give in.
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« Reply #31 on: June 02, 2005, 01:55:26 PM » |
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JIM: TELL US! YOU SEE THIS SCREWDRIVER? IT'S GOING IN YOUR EYE NEXT IF YOU DONT TELL ME. TELL US NOW!
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« Reply #32 on: June 02, 2005, 08:57:29 PM » |
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It was a bounty hunter named..... ughhhhh ....heh /no.
CUT TO OUTSIDE WHEREHOUSE:
Police forces have assembled and the two FBI agents from earlier have just arrived. They move over the plan with the officer who was in charge until they arrived.
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« Reply #33 on: June 03, 2005, 12:33:54 PM » |
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HEAD OFFICER: Let's try to do this quietly. We might be able to surprise them if we do so.
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« Reply #34 on: June 03, 2005, 04:29:09 PM » |
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AGENT SMITH (previously known as "MAN"): Thanks, but we'll take it from here. Though I do agree. You four (pointing) head around the East side and go in through the side entrance. You two: cover the permiter and monitor all radio communication. You: keep dispatch informed of our progress. Ready, [partner]? Let's go in the front.
PARTNER: Heh, you catch on to this pretty quick. Alright, let's move. No one fires until we give the order. Clear?
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« Reply #35 on: June 03, 2005, 05:43:28 PM » |
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HEAD OFFICER: Right. Men, you heard him! Let's move.
the men run out of frame
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« Reply #36 on: June 03, 2005, 11:02:00 PM » |
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CUT TO: INSIDE WAREHOUSE:
THUG: Sir, the cameras are showing cops outside.
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« Reply #37 on: June 04, 2005, 06:31:48 AM » |
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JIM: Damnit! . . . .
The Thug, now known as Hammond, looks at Jim as if waiting for the next move.
JIM: Wait, I've got an idea.
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« Reply #38 on: June 04, 2005, 07:40:59 AM » |
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JIM fnds several barrels of gasoline in the warehouse. He dumps them all out far from the interogation site but close to the entrance.
JIM: Get your blowtorch ready, Bruno.
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« Reply #39 on: June 04, 2005, 11:45:58 AM » |
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The two FBI agents come in and take them by surprise.
AGENTS: Hands up. Don't move.
JIM: And how are you going to stop us?
The other officers come in from multiple directions. Jim and his underlings look worried.
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« Reply #40 on: June 04, 2005, 12:07:26 PM » |
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JIM: NOW BRUNO!
Bruno ignites the gasoline. It ignites only a few on fire but it catches the agents off guard long enough for the criminals to grab their weapons. A gunfight breaks out.
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« Reply #41 on: June 04, 2005, 12:09:06 PM » |
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The gunfire drives the thugs back and the hostages are pulled away from the flames by the agents. The pursuit begins.
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« Reply #42 on: June 05, 2005, 05:40:19 AM » |
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AGENT to HOSTAGES: Are you all right?
GUY HOSTAGE (forgot his name): Don't.......let them.........get away. Great secret. Must not..........fail..............
He falls limp in his arms.
AGENT: He's dead Jim (just kidding Ignore that line).
GIRL HOSTAGE (forgot her name too): Is he dead?
AGENT: I'm afraid so.
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