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Yodaman

« Reply #75 on: May 16, 2006, 03:53:04 AM »

Better?

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Funk, E

« Reply #76 on: May 16, 2006, 08:48:09 AM »

A little.  All of the text is the wrong color, though.  It's too light.
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Yodaman

« Reply #77 on: May 17, 2006, 01:05:18 PM »

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starwalker

« Reply #78 on: May 17, 2006, 01:23:39 PM »

better, but that pink writing really kills it and makes it look sloppy, change it to a darker cooler, the yellow is alright,except near her knee, do something with that.
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Yodaman

« Reply #79 on: May 17, 2006, 01:32:43 PM »

Any suggestions as to exact color would be nice.

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JustinZ

« Reply #80 on: May 17, 2006, 03:12:10 PM »

Adding some kind of an outline or drop-shadow to the letters would also help make it more legible, regardless of the color.  If you look closely at the text on book/magazine covers and on posters, you'll see that they almost always have some sort of outline to separate the text from the picture.

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TechKrill

« Reply #81 on: May 17, 2006, 03:18:55 PM »

For some reason that cover makes me smile...and yes, something is needed to accent the text a little bit. Maybe a 1 px black stroke around the edges of the text will bring it out sufficiently.
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